D-Dragon's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[colourPod]

Impressive and clever

Wow! This is nice! The thing that really sold it for me was the fact that you DIDN'T use some stupid hip-hop or rock song in the background. I really liked this.

dapbot responds:

Thanks. I really dislike the drum & bass / trance / psytrance / house / rock / psytrance in most games. Glad i have company!

[The legend of Circle game]

Needs improvement

You need to fix it so the coins don't appear UNDERNEATH the fucking spikes. but THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for spelling"you're" right.

Deranged-Productions responds:

But it'th thuppothed to be challenging.... It's way too easy if they're away from all danger.

[Weapon Tutorial]

No preloader because...

...You had to put a shitty song at full fucking quality into the damn movie. NOBODY CARES ABOUT THE BACKGROUND MUSIC IN A FUCKING TUTORIAL

[Prevent Attack Part 2]

one slight change

Make it taller than it is wide. It's impossible to see anything coming up ahead in time to do anything about it.

[Buzzed]

Change a few things

Speaking as a Game Design major, here are a few things you can do to really make this game shine:

1) Replace the lives with an energy bar. It gives the exact same effect as you have now, but people are more used to having a maximum cap (in this case, 8) on energy, not lives.

2) Pick a more accessible basis for the topic. The gameplay itself can be associated with any number of topics but the "keeping your buzz" idea is both overdone and poorly executed in this case.

3) Perhaps add some different game modes:
A mode where the size/shape of the arena changes.
A mode where you can gain some way to remove the "downers"

4) Spruce up the packaging and fix any glitches in the code.
and PLEASE put in a function to mute the music and/or sound.

Thank you for your time
-D.D

[Madness tutorial 1.5]

Swing and a miss

Tutorials are probably one of the easiest things to program in flash and you STILL managed to fuck it up. You've got to fix your goto frames and your hit frames on your buttons.
If you have an outlined button make the button ACTUALLY CONTAINED IN THE OUTLINE.

[Rainbowsphere: N.E]

FATAL FLAW

After level 10 the game starts glitching BADLY. It freezes for a frame every half second, which is repeatedly lethal for anyone playing. Fix it, and the game might be playable.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

you just got a slow comp, and its newgrounds too, newgrounds dramatically slows down the game, i dont have this problem when i play it on my site.